Tuesday, 27 March 2012
Tuesday 27th March 2012 - C is for Critique
Then it was pointed out today it was lacking depth and atmosphere.
My internal rage-o-meter hit 100 and I almost fell off my chair.
But, after I'd finished spitting venom and came out of a hole of self deprication, I done the rather more constructive thing of making it *better*
And here's both side by side; a before and after.
Moral: I must take critique better.